Invisible ink

 Their was a little butterfly. Her name was Chinu . She was very naughty .She did not obey her mother. One day she went very far. She did not find her way back home. She began to cry. Hearing her cry an ant came to her. Why are you crying?  Butterfly replied I have lost my way. The ant could not help her. A spider came that way but it could not help her. At last a dragonfly came to her. Why are you crying? I have lost my way. So dragonfly help her come to,sit on my back. Finely ant came bake our home .

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  1. Nice climax and I loved the character of butterfly. You need to work on present past tense and sentence structure and spellings.

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